tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486740904602696078.post2272506916603208797..comments2024-01-27T23:26:35.301-08:00Comments on Live with Flair: My Best Advice for an Admissions EssayHeatherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15289182682225179442noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486740904602696078.post-59613586611539182092012-11-25T21:45:58.735-08:002012-11-25T21:45:58.735-08:00I personally feel that you have done a job here
al...I personally feel that you have done a job here<br />although you are not part of any admissions committee but you got the<br />experienced and this will help me for my <a href="http://www.theharvardwriters.com/services/assignments-writing-service.html" rel="nofollow">assignment<br />writing services</a> . I know it will not be easy for me but I am working<br />hard for it.Jack Hallnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3486740904602696078.post-32937263754787190642012-10-07T15:24:24.653-07:002012-10-07T15:24:24.653-07:00I once got a thank you email from an admissions of...I once got a thank you email from an admissions officer after he read my essay. I did write it about an experience in a third world country . . . and how frustrated I was to see that consumerism and the want for more had taken hold in my host family. I wrote about my anticipation of going on the trip and my excitement to be away from US culture, only to find that my family wanted to talk about the US, know about the US, and own lots of stuff. I was in a village of a thousand people in rural Honduras, and we watched Xena the warrior princess on a TV powered by the truck battery. It was pretty poignant, if I may beat my own drum.<br /><br />The only other really great essay I've heard of was an example one in a speech I was transcribing (I used to do that for spare $). The guy was talking about writing essays and how he helped a student punch up his essay about getting fired from McDonalds. I wish I could remember more details. The key is to not make it a pat essay that you think you want someone else to hear. The idea for making it great is to write something real and true for yourself.Leah Penn Inmannoreply@blogger.com